Discussion
1. What are the key elements of bureaucracy? Describe the main moral and practical criticisms of bureaucracy as an organizational form.
210166426 MGT6127-1
by Kang Huang
Submission date: 18-Jan-2022 02:54PM (UTC+0000)
Submission ID: 169483833
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210166426 MGT6127-1
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE
82
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
/100
This was an excellent assignment. You clearly
demonstrate that you fully understand and
mastered the concepts of scientiï¬Âc management.
There is a well-developed ability to analyse,
synthesise and apply knowledge and concepts.
The answer is well directed and relevant to the
question set. There is evidence of critical
reflection. The writing style flows well and ideas
are expressed clearly, written with authority and
insight. The presentation could be improved by
inserting a blank line above headings to make
each section more obvious – although this is minor
compared to the content of your work. There is a
wide range of reading although few references to
the core reading requirements for the course, so
this needs to be addressed.
Your assignment was a pleasure to read. Well
done!
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Comment 1
VH
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– referencing incorrect
incorrect referencing
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assignment
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– quotation page number
Page number required when using quotations
Comment 3
The Introduction set the context of your work.
Comment 4
To improve your presentation, the heading could be more obvious by inserting a blank line
above it – what do you think?
Comment 5
metaphorical (?)
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Comment 6
You demonstrate that you fully understand the concepts of scientiï¬Âc management.
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Comment 7
To improve your presentation, the heading could be more obvious by inserting a blank line
above it – what do you think?
Comment 8
Good example 😉
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Comment 9
There is a wide range of reading but few references to the core reading requirements for
the course.
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